unclear word order
Fragment of a discussion from Portal talk:De/LiquidThreads
- Das Bearbeiten von Feldern ist denjenigen erlaubt, die sie erstellt haben, sowie Kuratoren.
sounds good to me.
"Sowie" is smoother here indeed. This is, because it more likely implies a little Pause before it, than "und".
Whether or not a formulation with "dürfen" or "erlauben" is preferable, depends on style, and what other related messages use (which I do not know).
Thanks. Also I am happily learning from these discussions. :-)
Yes, your suggestion of "dürfen" spares a partizip and a nominalisation :-)
Felder bearbeiten dürfen nur diejenigen, die sie erstellt haben, sowie Kuratoren.
And so shoooooort ! I added a the translation of "only". As far as i understood we found a good solution. So i make the change. Feel free to change if i am not right.